雅思小作文必背40篇范文，雅思作文评分四个标准

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不是有好词好句就会拿高分的。。。

重点是有明确的主题（或论点）peiXunjia.CoM，然后条理分明地把主题体现出来（或有理有据地论证论点）。如果一篇文章条理清晰，思路清晰，主题明确，即使没有好戏好句，也会拿高分。你要让高官知道你要说明什么问题。。。。

一、剑桥雅思大作文真题

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

二、雅思考生7.5分样卷

Nowadays, there are lots of advertisements on television or on the streets. Some people think that the advertising boosts the sales of goods and it encourages people to buy things unnecessarily. This arguments may be true. In my country, many advertising companies produce advertisements with famous and popular actors or singers. People, especially youngsters, buy goods that their favourite singer advertise, although they do not really need the products.

Also, on the television screen, a product may look gorgeous and good quality. As a result of it, people often buy goods without enough consideration. Consumers may not actually need it but they buy goods impulsively soon after they watch the advertising. Furthermore, as many customers buy a particular product due to its advertising campaign, the other people may be affected by the trend, even if the product is not of the real needs of the society.

On the other hand, there are various aspects against these arguments. Moreover, it is people’s choice to make a decision to buy goods. Advertising may be not a cause of customers’ buying habits. Individuals have their own spending habits. If they have got enough disposable income, then the right to make a decision is given to them. No one actually can judge whether the goods sold are the real needs of the society or not.

In addition, as there should be a limited amount of disposable income consumers are able to spend, people try to allocate their budgets. They cannot be simply swayed by those advertisements.

In conclusion, as customers have their own strong opinions and standard of good quality goods, it is better to leave them to make their own decision in buy goods. It is fairly difficult to say everyone is swayed by advertising and buy good impulsively. However, in advertising to those children as children have not got enough ability to control themselves or to know what they need.

― 摘自《剑6》第162页

三、胡敏雅思满分作文

下面刊登的文章是由中国雅思之父、新航道国际教育集团总裁兼北京新航道学校校长胡敏教授严格按照雅思9分作文标准对《剑6》第162页7.5分作文进行的修订版本。广大雅思考生以及英语学习爱好者仔细对照研读这两篇文章一定会受益匪浅。欲知胡敏老师的详细点评，敬请关注无忧雅思网的近期预告。

Nowadays, it is common to see advertisements on television or on billboards in the streets. Some people think that advertising boosts the sales of goods and encourages people to buy things they do not necessarily need. This argument contains some truth. In my country, advertising companies often produce advertisements featuring popular actors or singers to induce people, especially youngsters, to acquire goods which their favourite actor or singer seems to endorse, whether they need the products or not.

On the one hand, on the television screen a product is always made to look attractive and of good quality. As a result, people often purchase such goods upon impulse. Furthermore, as the number of consumers of a particular product increases under the impact of a persistent advertising campaign, others may be drawn into the trend, creating a large market for products which do not satisfy the real needs of society.

On the other hand, there are various counterarguments to these objections: The decision to make a purchase is a matter of personal choice. Advertising may not be the main cause of consumption habits. Individuals have their own preferences, and if they have enough disposable income it is entirely up to them how they use it. Also, it is doubtful if anyone can have the authority to judge whether goods for sale are really needed by society or not. Finally, as there is always only a limited amount of disposable income for anyone, people try to manage their budgets as best as they can. Advertising can seldom persuade people to spend money that they need for more urgent things, or to spend money that they do not have (for instance, by buying in installments).

In conclusion, as buyers have their own strong opinions and views on what constitutes good quality and on what they need and do not need, it is better to leave them to make their own decisions. It is difficult to claim that everyone is swayed by advertising and always makes purchases impulsively. However, it is a good idea to put restraints on advertising aimed at children and inexperienced youngsters. Otherwise, they might be persuaded to buy goods that they do not need, or to spend money that they do not have!

哎~

没办法~

这个雅思说不准的

很歪~因为毕竟文化不一样

你感觉对的考官不一定那么想

我就是卡在作文上了

你加油吧

唔

要不多看看范文?

然后研究下和你平时的文章差距在哪里...

你这个分数,排除误判的情况么

个人觉得..基础多练练吧

还是支持你不用模板

自己准备些好的事例,平时尽量精确,华丽地一句话一句话地列好,记住

考试时选择性的挑几句

毕竟IELTS作文时间很长的,足够发挥

作文和阅读一般是用来拉分的啦.

祝您过7哈~

我有时候很不明白各个老师的评分标准……

我雅思作文考了7分

六级作文考了90分……

我究竟写作水平是不好呢还是一般呢……

怎么差距那么大啊？怎么写作文才好啊？？

平时注意多收集资料，做剑桥4、5、6的作文，然后和范文多对比・・慎小嶷的《十天突破雅思写作》也可以，不过用的人太多了，模板都快差不多了，最好的办法是结合书上的思路，找篇剑桥真题里面你觉得不错的范文，总结一个属于你自己的独特的模板。

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